Monday, 21 February 2011

I Can't Write a Poem By Dorrie

Forget it
You must be kidding
My bar blisters hurt and one popped
I've only got a three second memory
My pencil is not sharp and I don't have a sharpener
I'm getting to distracted because people are talking
My arm really hurts!
I forgot how to write
My eyes really hurt
I can't really be bothered
Time's up? Uh oh!
All I have is a dumb list of excuses.
You like it? Really? No kidding.
Thanks a lot. Would you like to see another one?

3 comments:

Ella said...

I LOVE YOUR POEM DOZ it is so good!!!!!!!Love Ella

Room 13 students said...

Nice Dorrie I really liked how you said you couldn't be bothered.Ruby

Room 13 students said...

NICE DOZ LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FRANKIE